Recount Writing-Rugby League

Rugby League. 
I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings in my writing. 
 Mrs Paraha helped me with this writing. 

On Sunday morning I travelled with Matua Matt to the 
 Whangarei Rugby fields to play rugby league. 
 I felt happy to be at the fields. When we got to the fields 
we were putting on our boots. After that we were putting on our Tautoro Titans tee-shirts. 
It was so fun to play rugby league with Matua Matt. 
We were playing Manaia. That team had good skills. 
I felt excited because we were winning. The game was cool. 
We won. 
Next we went to the Hikurangi lake. 
We went to the big cliff. I was the first one to jump off. 
 I was a little bit scared. When I jumped off I was yelling. 
It was cool to jump off the big cliff. It was enjoyed my day with Matua Matt. 
It was fun.