Recount Writing-The meeting.

WALT use the correct structure for Recount Writing.
The meeting. 
On Saturday Me and my koro went to the Mangamuka Marae for a meeting. My koro was in the marae for the a long time. The meeting was big.
When my koro was in the meeting I was playing with my cousin outside on the bike.
My cousin’s name was Nikau Tango.
Next we played rugby. I got 10 tries and my cousin got 10 tries. So were a tie.
Then we went home and played tiggy outside. I was in.
I chased my cousin as fast as and I got him. So he was in.
He tried to catch me but I ran away so he couldn't  catch  me.
It was a cool game.