His hands fell on his hips while he was asking his dog ¨where are my socks¨?.
His face fell on the ground when his dog replied and said ¨i don't know where they are¨.
His voice sounded like a demon when he said ¨where are my sock¨!
He looked confused as his eyebrows narrowed and he asked his papa ¨Do you know where my socks are?¨.
His shoulders sink to the ground while he excitedly asked papa ¨Are my sock in the laundry?¨.
We were learning about how to show without telling the readers what the story is about. We watched a video about Show Don´t Tell.
I really enjoyed talking about the action of the characters in the story and learning about show don´t tell.
Next time I need to use better words instead of rookie words.Such as awsome adjectives and vivid verbs.
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